July 19, 2011

dark sugar



...

do you see them?

the black & white words

tumbling from my lips

laced in your red irridescent

these expressions ~ emotions

that once hung snug

from the ceiling of my mind

now loosened

by the deep in your voice

or was it

your explosive love?

but...

do you see what youve done?

do you see them?

...

['lips' pix by littlemewhatever]

8 comments:

  1. ...those deep dark thoughts spilling out is a good image...must be doing something right...smiles.

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  2. Great poem about the one that inspires us to passion's love!

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  3. I like this very much . . .

    "that once hung snug

    from the ceiling of my mind

    now loosened

    by the deep in your voice"

    Great imagery. :-)

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  4. Thank goodness for the muse! ;-)

    Nice one!

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  5. I enjoyed this very much, and your blog is lush! :)

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  6. to see them...feel them...perhaps taste them... a delicious pouring of words.

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  7. But when will you see me, my sweet?

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