August 23, 2011

my blue flame



...

when i look at him

scents stop

noise tumbles back into itself

people pop like soapy iridescent bubbles

i only see

the slow seductive dance

of the soft curved curls in his smile

i only feel

the shape of Love

when he fastens himself onto me with those eyes

i only hear

the infinite protection of a calming thick nite

in the shade of his Spanish voice

i am mesmerized

found

captured

liberated

and... complete

when i look at him

...

[pixelated picture of Him :)]













12 comments:

  1. Damn a whole lot of purple..haha..wonderful write too, but the pic is blue..shame..needs to be purple..haha

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  2. now why would i need Him to be purple when i have me purple? LoL ;p hues of purple has been an obsession since 1st grade... and His fave color is blue hence the blue tint. =) thankyou for reading!!!

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  3. smiles. this is a beautiful tribute to the love you hold..so captivating as it is...very nice..

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  4. I love the idea of people popping like iridescent bubbles

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  5. Love your header image!

    Great write... elusive, yet direct. powerfully erotic.

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  6. I have felt just like that! Poetic and well said.

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  7. A wonderful expression of love. Sincere and simple.

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  8. Wonderful! Hope he appreciates you just as much...and I personally love the blue, especially against the purple...makes for a striking combination (I get the sense, that, so too...do the 2 of you!)

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  9. Wonderful sense of smoldering love and lovely word pictures make this poem extra hot--loved these lines: "..noise tumbles back into itself/people pop like soapy iridescent bubbles.."

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  10. I like this ...because I can totally relate! Thanks for sharing!

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  11. " . . noise tumbles back into itself . " A vivid manifestation.

    Inspirations of the heart . . . aren't they most profound?

    Cheers!

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  12. utterly romantic and seductive - love when
    someone brings out this feeling in me.

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