January 25, 2011

3:04am


 
 
...
 
he enjoys her devotion
 
while juggling with her soul&mind
 
strategically places kisses
 
while internally calling her an emotionwhore
 
with lovenumbed eyes she is too blind to hear
 
&allows herself to stay locked in his cage even more
 
months go by &bruises start to whisper&illuminate
 
by aimed words wrapped in knifeblanket
 
viciously stabbing the woman that most wanted
 
this snow-white skinned creature he had
 
oblivious of the alluring she they saw
 
he only wanted to mentally destroy her
 
unaware it created images in her soul of his murder
 
so now her past adoration
 
has turned into a present determination
 
for an end
 
&she knew it meant...ending him
 
the shadows in her mind chime witching hour
 
his broken glassed window inviting the breeze
 
the hair around her face gently falls
 
to the rhythym of the laughing wind
 
standing above him, the opposite of her sin
 
unable to remember the dark eyes she used to crave
 
as they opened...staring into hers
 
the clock strikes pale
 
as the surroundings fall
 
into a quiet blur
 
she sees his body leaking
 
their blood, his lies, her mess
 
caressing her hair behind her ear
 
she smirks walking away satisfied
 
of her final over-reaction
 
he was now dead
 
&shes never felt more
 
alive
 
...
 
{'Behind' pix by MultiCuriosity}
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

7 comments:

  1. dark but...emotional abuse is dreadful, hard to prove...and i am glad in the end she finds life..nice one shot.

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  2. chilling.... very well written with inventive twists of dark language

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  3. Gripping poetic tale...intense write.

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  4. dark, decadent, chilling, gripping and should scare the hell out of abusive men.

    very powerful! ♥ dani

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  5. Good emotional content, images - flows well.

    Love the lines:
    by aimed words wrapped in knifeblanket

    viciously stabbing the woman that most wanted

    this snow-white skinned creature he had

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