December 7, 2010

look.at.me



...


see~ with your ears

drown in the tones laced in love that i speak when your name drips from my lips


...look at me...


see~ what you feel


caress the curves of our moonlight as it traipses along our skin sending us into sighs


...look at me...
see~ as if you are blind


embrace the emotions in your mind that our blended imagination can only find

...look at me...


listen to your intuition


feel the whole in your soul


recognize the reflection in your eyes


...look at me...


in you


...




{'DiscoTattoo' pix by systemivoid}









15 comments:

  1. Purple passion at it's best lili ;)

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  2. each word of yours is a sigh for me <3

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  3. great feeling/ great looks

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot a sensual piece

    Moonie smiles

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  4. Love "see as if you are blind." Nice sultry poem!

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  5. Interestingly sensual. Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender

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  6. "see as if you are blind" powerful line, really.

    Cheers!

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  7. look at me in you - see with your ears - great use of the senses in your poem - enjoyed it!

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  8. the repetition of 'look at me' is strong and holds this piece firmly. Purple on black gives quite an ambience also

    Cheers

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  9. Clever, almost disturbing, intimate, effective.

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  10. I like the repetition very much, one would not be able to look away from you, after reading these words! Love the purple, brilliant.

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