January 17, 2011

i Love You . . .



...

&i placed 

your heart

in the traffic

of

my

emotion

accidentally shattering

your brakes

so i could be sure

that

the way i Love

didnt

break

You . . .

...

{'NoEmotion' pix by FreakyDarlingx}

9 comments:

  1. tight...and now u know...nice one shot...

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  2. tight writing - lovely One Shot

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  3. Gives new meaning to playing in traffic. Brakes and passion don't mix, anyway.

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  4. Love the metaphor lili, I can't drive 55 either...

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  5. Dear Lili

    Very interesting.. highway to love, with no brakes on...
    I liked it.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
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