...
im trying
to avoid
the glass
you spilled
into
broken bits
into
broken bits
as i
tippytoe across
but
the scent of lies
that was inside
that was inside
reaches my lips
&i can taste
so
i go outside
to breathe
&even the stars
wana hide
but
im too clouded
to seek
for
the pieces
that fell
on the ground
when your words
sliced
into
me
...
{'BehindBrokenGlass' pix by darksnowolf}
Powerful writing
ReplyDeletelove the powerful simplicity of this piece. i'll be back!
ReplyDeleteWords can definitely cut into one's heart. Wonderful use of minimalist lines.
ReplyDeleteooo...this one carries quite the sting...deeper than skin deep...nice one shot...
ReplyDeleteSo much said....in so few words
ReplyDeleteLili I always say you're amazing so today I'm going to say something different...wow remind ne never to cross you lady! Excellent minimalism built up to show emotion.
ReplyDeleteI think I may be an HSP.
ReplyDeleteStunning!
ReplyDeleteDear Lili
ReplyDeleteAmazingly beautiful... love the rawness of it... Thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Twitter @VerseEveryDay
powerful, dark and raw. love the way even the line breaks seem to cut here.
ReplyDeleteNice pseudo-twist at the end. Focused, exemplary work.
ReplyDeleteYou and I seem to be very similar in the way we write our words and apparently we both love purple :) Thank you for sharing this one... the emotion is evident and comes through with such power. Nice to meet you, so to speak.
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