October 18, 2011

the nite us became we



...

you have found me

[ill let you smile thinking that]

but ive been carefully observing

eyeing...

adjusting pieces of signs...

building a hunger...

ive been waiting...

to undo your skin

so i can step inside

clothing myself with your ribs

to splash in the rivers of your veins.

kiss me with every world of your being

enlighten my vision with the deep of your voice

lift me high with your tongue

so that i can swallow your Love

and all that you are

wont be anymore.

...


['BoundToHappen' pix by C PRO]
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11 comments:

  1. hedgewitchOctober 18, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    Intense, sensual and full of unexpected images.

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  2. Brian MillerOctober 18, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    shivers....there is a dark sensuality in this...the mix of desire and well something much darker...smiles.

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  3. TinoOctober 18, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Beautifully chilling, exotic, erotic and......

    I need a cold shower ;-)

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  4. ayalaOctober 18, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    sensual and intense!

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  5. rmpOctober 19, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    wow and yikes! an interesting and intoxicating piece of writing.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    Oh, miss lili! You have undone me again : )

    ...lift me high with your tongue
    so I can swallow your love...

    My favorite lines above, although the whole piece is gorgeous ♥

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  7. BeachannyOctober 19, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Vixen vampire lady. Beginnings..love, after while it's fine to enjoy food, wine & conversation. I do understand. Well written.

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  8. libithinaOctober 19, 2011 at 4:00 PM

    step inside your skin ~ to splash in the rivers of your veins'
    amazingly sensual words ~
    lovely
    Lib x

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  9. Ann LeFloreOctober 19, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    amazing to enter into or inside of your own skin and go directly to the veins wonderfully done
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/farewell-my-three-legged-friend/

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  10. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 20, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    beautiful and touching.
    :)

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  11. The Poetry PalaceNovember 3, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    I fall in love with your poetry,

    smiles.
    invite you to share a poem of your choice with poets rally today.

    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/

    welcome, hope to see you share, make poetic friends, expose your tALENT TO WIDER AUDIENCE.

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