...
when i look at him
scents stop
noise tumbles back into itself
people pop like soapy iridescent bubbles
i only see
the slow seductive dance
of the soft curved curls in his smile
i only feel
the shape of Love
when he fastens himself onto me with those eyes
i only hear
the infinite protection of a calming thick nite
in the shade of his Spanish voice
i am mesmerized
found
captured
liberated
and... complete
when i look at him
...
[pixelated picture of Him :)]
Damn a whole lot of purple..haha..wonderful write too, but the pic is blue..shame..needs to be purple..haha
ReplyDeletenow why would i need Him to be purple when i have me purple? LoL ;p hues of purple has been an obsession since 1st grade... and His fave color is blue hence the blue tint. =) thankyou for reading!!!
ReplyDeletesmiles. this is a beautiful tribute to the love you hold..so captivating as it is...very nice..
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of people popping like iridescent bubbles
ReplyDeleteLove your header image!
ReplyDeleteGreat write... elusive, yet direct. powerfully erotic.
I have felt just like that! Poetic and well said.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful expression of love. Sincere and simple.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Hope he appreciates you just as much...and I personally love the blue, especially against the purple...makes for a striking combination (I get the sense, that, so too...do the 2 of you!)
ReplyDeleteWonderful sense of smoldering love and lovely word pictures make this poem extra hot--loved these lines: "..noise tumbles back into itself/people pop like soapy iridescent bubbles.."
ReplyDeleteI like this ...because I can totally relate! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDelete" . . noise tumbles back into itself . " A vivid manifestation.
ReplyDeleteInspirations of the heart . . . aren't they most profound?
Cheers!
utterly romantic and seductive - love when
ReplyDeletesomeone brings out this feeling in me.