...
do you see them?
the black & white words
tumbling from my lips
laced in your red irridescent
these expressions ~ emotions
that once hung snug
from the ceiling of my mind
now loosened
by the deep in your voice
or was it
your explosive love?
but...
do you see what youve done?
do you see them?
...
['lips' pix by littlemewhatever]
...those deep dark thoughts spilling out is a good image...must be doing something right...smiles.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem about the one that inspires us to passion's love!
ReplyDeleteI like this very much . . .
ReplyDelete"that once hung snug
from the ceiling of my mind
now loosened
by the deep in your voice"
Great imagery. :-)
Thank goodness for the muse! ;-)
ReplyDeleteNice one!
I enjoyed this very much, and your blog is lush! :)
ReplyDeleteto see them...feel them...perhaps taste them... a delicious pouring of words.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteBut when will you see me, my sweet?
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