...
his curdled soot ooozes into my brain
filled with extreme lunacy unrestrained
a pit of sick fucked up delusion
hanging from the sky of a maniac seclusion
his shadows bite my snow-white skin
flying in my soul, dripping of darkest sin
screaming echos of an inside wind
because the silence in my head is my only friend
creating numbness like 500 pills
a coma calmness, the kind that kills
medicated padding & 4walls without dreams
eyes bright but their sight isnt what it seems
im gona love mr death & hate miss insanity
both are you, my adoring profanity
because its really just me in this cushioned room
im the pyscho in your mind in fucking full bloom
...
{'Insanity' pix by Aurelie}
his curdled soot ooozes into my brain
filled with extreme lunacy unrestrained
a pit of sick fucked up delusion
hanging from the sky of a maniac seclusion
his shadows bite my snow-white skin
flying in my soul, dripping of darkest sin
screaming echos of an inside wind
because the silence in my head is my only friend
creating numbness like 500 pills
a coma calmness, the kind that kills
medicated padding & 4walls without dreams
eyes bright but their sight isnt what it seems
im gona love mr death & hate miss insanity
both are you, my adoring profanity
because its really just me in this cushioned room
im the pyscho in your mind in fucking full bloom
...
{'Insanity' pix by Aurelie}
HOLY SHIT!!! this one is amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work. Tweeting this bad boy!
ReplyDeleteGreat interplay of words, ice-pick precision imagery, etc. Exemplary. :)
ReplyDeleteYou convey the sense of torture very well
ReplyDeleteKnocked me right back with that one--absolutely the best use of frightening imagery I've seen in a long time...
ReplyDeleteIntense! "Coma calmness" was a great counterbalancing phrase to the manic body. I also liked the double meaning of "miss sanity"
ReplyDeleteAwesome One Shot, Lili!
Lilli!! ****Squeeeeeeeeeee**** OMG are you still tweeting? Loved the poem, manic, torn, illusionary. <3<3 Missed you babes, I'm at @BethanPie, my original account now. Thanks for being there for me I'll never forget it hun xxxxx
ReplyDeleteDear Lili
ReplyDeleteRaw, powerful and stark... like your words..
'his shadows bite my snow-white skin
flying in my soul, dripping of darkest sin'
Some times its good to give in to your dark thoughts in minds darkest corner and ooze out blood verses... it relieves lots of pain...
I liked the way you have portrayed the imagined...
Thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
knocked out...speechless...excellent..pete
ReplyDeleteI still enjoy reading your poetry. I hope your life is good.
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