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see~ with your ears
drown in the tones laced in love that i speak when your name drips from my lips
...look at me...
see~ what you feel
caress the curves of our moonlight as it traipses along our skin sending us into sighs
...look at me...
see~ as if you are blind
embrace the emotions in your mind that our blended imagination can only find
...look at me...
listen to your intuition
feel the whole in your soul
recognize the reflection in your eyes
...look at me...
in you
...
{'DiscoTattoo' pix by systemivoid}
Perfectly lucious :)
ReplyDeletePurple passion at it's best lili ;)
ReplyDeleteeach word of yours is a sigh for me <3
ReplyDeletegreat feeling/ great looks
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with One Shot a sensual piece
Moonie smiles
Love "see as if you are blind." Nice sultry poem!
ReplyDeleteDelicious
ReplyDeleteEnchanting and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAnita.
Interestingly sensual. Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDelete"see as if you are blind" powerful line, really.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
look at me in you - see with your ears - great use of the senses in your poem - enjoyed it!
ReplyDeletethe repetition of 'look at me' is strong and holds this piece firmly. Purple on black gives quite an ambience also
ReplyDeleteCheers
Luke @ WordSalad
Clever, almost disturbing, intimate, effective.
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition very much, one would not be able to look away from you, after reading these words! Love the purple, brilliant.
ReplyDeleteAward/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Sunday!
ReplyDeletewelcome to JP...
thanks for the support.