tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post2485904599365274693..comments2023-10-31T10:00:54.712-05:00Comments on beneath the purple wall: violent violetLilihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02597502472218533969noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-53447673470523379192011-05-25T11:04:52.269-05:002011-05-25T11:04:52.269-05:00the calmness you have despite heated air will enab...the calmness you have despite heated air will enable you to win and find joy.<br /><br />profound word play.<br />Glad to read you.<br /><br />keep it up.Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-29263358877033961082011-05-19T05:16:34.626-05:002011-05-19T05:16:34.626-05:00set yourself free,
well expressed sentiments,
lov...set yourself free,<br />well expressed sentiments,<br /><br />love your blog, keep it up.<br /><br /><br />check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-5029919116241659802011-05-11T13:14:24.911-05:002011-05-11T13:14:24.911-05:00wonderful wordplay here, defiant and confident. lo...wonderful wordplay here, defiant and confident. love the last two lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-91021260072735676762011-05-11T10:10:57.112-05:002011-05-11T10:10:57.112-05:00"the fire shouts out sparks & i know whic..."the fire shouts out sparks & i know which memory its met"<br /><br />That's my favorite line. I always think, if it makes you stronger, it's love, but if it drags you down, it's something else.<br /><br />I enjoyed reading this fiery poem.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-9833008011221286872011-05-10T22:35:27.408-05:002011-05-10T22:35:27.408-05:00To this reader the voice in the piece is defiant, ...To this reader the voice in the piece is defiant, and yet it seems, still questioning the choice of letting go. So they reach into the flame, not only to "reach out" one last time, but get reminded why they are letting go. I hope that makes sense. Great stuff, L...RSRasiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10635336690574067102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8180397032045597909.post-69792839507491528352011-05-10T22:23:02.036-05:002011-05-10T22:23:02.036-05:00i would have chose the fire as well...knowing whic...i would have chose the fire as well...knowing which memory it met. ha nice. enjoy that freedom...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com